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  • SummerJazLyrics

    SummerJazLyrics (100)

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    Wow! I'm loving this story!! I keep cracking up laughing! And now my sister thinks I'm a freak for laughing to myself so much... Oh well! I'm having a good time :3

    please update soon! I can't wait *clicks suscription button* ;)
    October 6th, 2010 at 11:44am
  • Violet Hours

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    Hey! Interesting story... I like the plot. Leila -Lee- is really funny and cute. Hmm... maybe you could try detailing you chapters. It's a great story, but maybe the flow is too fast. I would say that you could try putting more descriptions. But overall, your story is really good. Hope you write more soon!
    June 30th, 2010 at 10:09am
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