More Than This - Comments

I miss this story.

I miss this.

Ah... I miss this.

he cares...
loving this story!

Samule is so amazing.
I just love the way he thinks, even if it is kind of morbid sometimes.
I wonder what he's going to do!

I tended to talk aloud a lot just to hear a human voice echo through this empty space.
Loved that line.
And, I can't wait for the next update!

Oooh, I like this very much so! Samule is so cute even in his ever brooding manner all the time. I like the way he thinks, kinda reminds me of myself sometimes. But anyways, I am definitely subscribing!!
It's quite interesting, and your writing & tone with it is just perfect.
Damn cliffhangers too! I can't wait to see what Samule does! :DD

please updatee!!!
I dont like cliffhangers
*pouts* :(
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aww a cliffhanger thingy..
i must know wht happens! :)

I really love this.
I feel like it's a real story of some guy:)
CONTINUE! :D please.

"Way to go Samule. Most dangerous thing I think I've done in five months." I talked lightly to myself, enjoying the own sad joke I had made.

I loved that line. (:
And, I also loved this chapter.
This might sound weird, but I love how not much has happened between the two male characters.
It's not too slow, or unrealistically fast.

Can't wait for the next update!

update please..?
must know wht happens..

I definitely can relate to how Samule felt on his birthday.
It's almost exactly like that for me whenever I have one.
You do an amazing job with relating to your characters,
and enabling the readers to see them for who they really are.

Hmm,
so we have another run in with the mystery boy.
:o

I'm really anxious to see who he is,
how he thinks, what he feels, etc.
If you ever make him to be a larger character,
it would be really cool to do a chapter in his perspective, maybe?
Just because he is such a mystery to the audience.

Anyways,
really great chapter. :)
I loved it as always!

I really love this story so far c:
The pace is great, I love that it's not like so many other stories where they're already all over each other by the fourth chapter. All the detail is great too.
Samule's character is really unique, very well written. His thought process is really interesting to read, although it's sad how depressed he seems most of the time. But with 'laundromat boy' I have a feeling it'll all take a turn for the best, even if it takes awhile.
Anyways, great update, I'm very excited for your next.

Yay. Thank you for the update; made my morning.
Aha, yeahyeah I'm a dork.

But I can't believe that; poor Samule, I would have called him and wished him happy birthday.
And ohhh, crazy laundry boy is back. :DD
I love how he made skipping his laundry day his own little rebellion to himself, cute.

I actually really liked this update.
And you're making me crave for the next!!

Update! :DD
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I just found this.
And I really love it already.
I like that you're taking it slow. (:
I also think the layout for this story is perfect.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Oh, and I'm also in love with the main character's name.
Samule.
It's just awesome. :D

So, you were suposed to have updated by now..
This better have gave you the extra ummpf.
Update! Now!
Please babes?
XD

Yeah; that's right.
I came back to whore on your comments.

And I read it again. ^...^
Whore whore whore.

Mehe.
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Oh my!
That was insanely incredible.
The descriptions were executed perfectly,
and you managed to write the dirty dream with flawless style.
I really love when a sexual element in a story isn't all fast and nasty.
Samule actually seemed to take in what was going on,
and I feel like the reader could really...er...empathize with his...problem. :D
Haha. :)
Really good chapter, I loved it!
You definitely spiced things up a bit!
Update soon, please.

Keep!
+1 subscriber! (:

haha his dream....but it was only a dream, too bad for sam
loving the story!