so, i basically think this is an awesome story that is written very well. i like how jimmy is developing. i can't wait for you to update, so please do it soon!! <3
Yes! When I saw the update I was clapping in my car grinning like a doofus. Lol oh well. I'm excited to get to the meat part of these chapters. Please make jimmy and Abby get all close and personal soon! Please with sprinkles and a cherry on top?!
So glad you updated! You have no idea how happy I was, when I opened my email this morning and found that this had been updated! Yay! I feel bad for her. THIS is EXACTLY why I don't drink. And another reason I don't pop pills anymore. I can't STAND being nausous or throwing up! Well, I don't know anyone who likes it, but I sure as hell am in the top 5 people that hate it the most! Ugh! Did she make it to the toilet, or did she end up throwing up on the bathroom floor? Anyway, I hope her stomache gets better, throwing up sucks some major ass! Jimmy, be nice to her, ya ass hat! No need to call her a bitch. Oh puh-lease, you did that because you like her, not JUST because you didn't want her getting fucked over. I can see right through ya, Jimbo. Lol, ok now that I am done talking to fictional characters, lol, I really hope you update soon! This really did make my morning! What a great way to start out the day!! Can't wait for the next chapter <3 Oh! Btw, you are a really great writer! Like there are some stories with such good summaries, and then the story writing just is so bad, or everything is rushed and it utterly pisses me off!! But this is timed perfectly and so well written!!!
I just have to say I love this story. Most st. Jimmy stories are all about him older always fucked up on drugs and not being any in the sense kind to anyone. I defiantly give u props on doing something different. Something real. I was a little heart broken when I got to the last chapter. I can't wait to see what you write next. Btw I love how you put him with a girl who is his complete opposite.
You really have no idea how much I love this story. Like, when you first updated it a couple days ago I was so excited that I might as well have done a fuckin backflip. And I don't even know how to do a backflip. But anyway, you're a fantastic writer and anything you write is gonna be good no matter what you think of it. As far as descriptions and dialogue goes, if you have some really great dialogue you don't need to worry about descriptions as much, and vice versa. I'm excited as hell to find out what happens when Jimmy brings Abbey home with him. Like, I dunno. Why it's so strange that he is in fact bringing her home.
YES ANOTHER FUCKING UPDATE!!!GOOD,THAT ALEX FUCKER GOT WHAT HE DESERVED,TRYING TO MOVE IN ON ABBEY LIKE THAT!LIKE WTF WAS HE THINKING?!I seriously think deep down Jimmy really likes Abbey,but just won't admit it.If she didn't mean anything to Jimmy,he wouldn't take care of her and look out for her the way he has.I could be wrong,but that is just my opinion.But it's clear Abbey likes him.I'm hoping that by the end,he'll have changed her into a punk.I can see it.I think Abbey would look good as a punk.So very happy that you updated!!Such a great story!I hope you update soon!!! I seriously cannot wait!!!!
"Not like you’re that fucking special to me or anything; he was just doing it to piss me off."..How did his saying this not affect her like it should have? Or maybe it did subconsciously, and that was why she was so emotional? No matter, I'm happy you updated!
AAAAAAAAAAAH!!OH MY GOODNESS!!I AM SOOOO GLAD YOU UPDATED,LIKE YOU DON'T EVEN REALIZE!!This was agreat chapter!Ok,wth is this Alex bastard doing in Jimmy's territory?Talking to her is fine, but more then that?No!I'm glad they finally got interupter because I was starting to get pissed!Again,so glad you updated,you are a fantastic writer and I just adore this story!Please update this as soon as you can!This update made my day!So anxious!Can't wait for more <3 <3
AHAHAHAHAHAAHHAHAHHAHAHAH You've finally updated! I loved it! What's Jimmy gonna do? What is SHE going to do? And most of all...Why do Jimmy and Alex hate each other so much? I wonder why Jimmy reacted so strongly to seeing this... c;
Just found this, but it's really good. I like how you portray your characters. I could definitely see this as a movie and Abbey being the narrator. Update soon.