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  • cherry is gone.

    cherry is gone. (100)

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    I also love the length. It really make the story bold. I'm so glad I found your writing.
    April 21st, 2010 at 06:58am
  • outtahereyall

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    It's perfect. It's so wonderfully short, but if you'd dragged it out any longer it wouldn't have that vagueness that works so well in it. I love how you have the little poem type of thing spread in it.
    April 1st, 2010 at 03:59am
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