The Survival Experiment - Comments

I like it! You should update soon so I can continue with the excitment that hardly ever fills my life!

That’s a really cool layout! I like the picture being on the side by the text, rather than on top, like mine usually are.

"No one is answering my texts, and do you know why?"…. "Because it's six in the morning on a weekend!"
That made me laugh. It was cute and…real!

This story kind of reminds me of my latest obsession: The Colony on Discovery Channel. It’s a lot like this. A group of nine are put in an run down shopping center place. They have to survive on their own—everyone else had died from an illness. A biological disaster.

Anyways, sorry to bore you. This story is brilliant. You really give your characters such life and make them so realistic, it’s brilliant!

You changed your layout! I'm jealous of your mad skills.

I liked it, but...The text was too small. It was a bit difficult to read.

Of course, I thought, the black guy has a gun.
I LOLed.

This line confused me a little bit: "I'm reading about desert climates. And when I'm done with that, I'm going to start on desert climates." Did you mean for her to repeat herself?

This story is going to remind me a lot of The Hunger Games. It's a book I just read about twenty-so people together in an arena trying to stay alive but at the same time kill everyone else. Good stuff. The main character kept on killing rabbits, so I think that's why I'm connecting the two. Hah.

This story is exciting! Keep writing!

This is such a cool idea for a story. I wonder what's going to happen to them all.
I bet Jade's going to die.