Mashed Potatoes - Comments

Cherry Road:

The World Is Cold:

I don't know why...but when I was thinking about the boy, I was thinking of Frank. Wierd, I know, but it's really cool

Oh, really, now? I guess we'll just have to wait and see, won't we?
Or will we ever find out who he is, Frank Iero or not? o.O

hint hint wink wink. :]

No, I lile it, alot. I can't point out any faults. I'll subscribe on the 11th, when i get my regular back. :]

Blue.Drummer.Insane:

THAT
WAS
GENIUS
Update now, okay? :D
It was the bestttt... thing... story... thing... ever!
I don't think you can improve... uh...
And to be honest, I thought of the voice being like... Have you ever watched Heroes? I imagined the voice being as Claire's dad... like someone holding him there because he's "special" XD
Muaha
Write more soon <3

:mrgreen: Thank you!
No, I've never watched Heroes...but I'll have to watch it sometime to see.
I'll try to write more soon, although I'm not making any promises.

THAT
WAS
GENIUS
Update now, okay? :D
It was the bestttt... thing... story... thing... ever!
I don't think you can improve... uh...
And to be honest, I thought of the voice being like... Have you ever watched Heroes? I imagined the voice being as Claire's dad... like someone holding him there because he's "special" XD
Muaha
Write more soon <3

The World Is Cold:

I don't know why...but when I was thinking about the boy, I was thinking of Frank. Wierd, I know, but it's really cool

Oh, really, now? I guess we'll just have to wait and see, won't we?
Or will we ever find out who he is, Frank Iero or not? o.O

I don't know why...but when I was thinking about the boy, I was thinking of Frank. Wierd, I know, but it's really cool

Ger-Owns-You:

HA! loved it! Its very very discripvite, I like it at the start (miss quote) "He didn't really feel like eating.......looking at the video cameras, infra-red and the one-way mirror in his room he took a small bite. He didn't identify the blob of starch in his mouth as mashed potatoes"(somthing along the lines of that) But really this is good shit keep it up....im going to read more :::::::::DDDD

Thanks, Ger! I don't mind, half the time I miss the quote as well. xD
I'm glad you'll keep reading! I don't know when I'll update, but...yeah. =]
It took me a while to come up with that part...I had an idea of what I wanted to say, but it didn't quite fit into the words I wanted. I sat there for about 10 minutes staring at my computer screen, thinking. xD

GottaLuvMoi:

Wow.
Just WOW.
It was quite amusing.... the moment I finsished this, my mom yelled "hon, do you what mashed potatoes for dinner?"
Of course, I yelled back "AHHHHHHH!! THE INDISTINCT STARCH OF DOOM!" (no, I didn't really, but i should've.)
I'll tell you one thing..... I will never eat them the same way again.
Please write more, this is REALLY AWESOME and SO
descriptive.......
I'm expecting more chapters IMMEDIATELY! NOW!
=-)

Yes, you should have! I would have LOVED to see the look on your mom's face. xD
Thanks, I try to be descriptive. But not overly so...you know what I mean? :)
Sadly, I have no idea when I'll update, and I have some ideas about what the next chapter should be, but I have to wait for the inspiration to come so that I can write a worthy second chapter. :mrgreen:

Wow.
Just WOW.
It was quite amusing.... the moment I finsished this, my mom yelled "hon, do you what mashed potatoes for dinner?"
Of course, I yelled back "AHHHHHHH!! THE INDISTINCT STARCH OF DOOM!" (no, I didn't really, but i should've.)
I'll tell you one thing..... I will never eat them the same way again.
Please write more, this is REALLY AWESOME and SO
descriptive.......
I'm expecting more chapters IMMEDIATELY! NOW!
=-)

HA! loved it! Its very very discripvite, I like it at the start (miss quote) "He didn't really feel like eating.......looking at the video cameras, infra-red and the one-way mirror in his room he took a small bite. He didn't identify the blob of starch in his mouth as mashed potatoes"(somthing along the lines of that) But really this is good shit keep it up....im going to read more :::::::::DDDD

AddictedToInsomniac:

This was very cool.
I don't really have anything to point out that you could improve of... I don't have the skills yet. Lmao

I love how you go into deep details. I could picture everything so clear. :)

Thanks, Spike. :mrgreen:

LOL...you ain't got no skillz?
...........:shifty That wasn't me, I swear. xD

<3 Cherry

This was very cool.
I don't really have anything to point out that you could improve of... I don't have the skills yet. Lmao

I love how you go into deep details. I could picture everything so clear. :)

This is most likely going to have more chapters, if anyone's wondering.

I won't be PMing/commenting/that type of thing, so subscribe if you wish.

But I'd much rather hear what you think about it.

WHAT CAN I IMPROVE UPON?

<3 Cherry