Darling, Be Human - Comments

  • erratic

    erratic (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    33
    Location:
    United States
    !!!
    I don't know where to begin gushing about how great this chapter is.
    Adelyn's relationship with Nick is superb. I have no idea why he was rigging up and eggs & poster paint contraption, but it was hilarious how Adelyn got her revenge.

    And then there's Alex. Holy cannoli, it's absolutely lovely how he and Adelyn admitted their feelings about the future and getting married. Although it seems early to think about such serious topics, it really seems like they've been together for years. They each know what to expect from each other and understand how crazy touring can get. On another note, his protectiveness was adorable.
    July 24th, 2010 at 07:49pm
  • mehness

    mehness (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    Australia
    omg that was soo good
    i LOVE alex
    ALL TIME LOW <3<3<3
    sooo hot haha
    yeah good story
    July 16th, 2010 at 01:31pm
  • erratic

    erratic (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    33
    Location:
    United States
    I just stumbled upon this story and I'm really glad that I did.
    You're quite a talented writer, and I love the way you've built up all the characters. The dynamic you've created between Alex and Adelyn is lovely. You perfectly balance out humor and romance. It's great.
    July 16th, 2010 at 05:58am
  • Lizzz

    Lizzz (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    33
    Location:
    United States
    I absolutely love this. Your writing is so beautiful. The way you described their actions just put a giddy grin on my face. Oh, and I loved how sweet Jack was :)
    June 3rd, 2010 at 07:32am
  • Belle-of-boulevards

    Belle-of-boulevards (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    37
    Location:
    Australia
    this is freaking amazing :)
    cant wait for moree!!!!
    April 10th, 2010 at 10:06am
  • byeitsbeenfun

    byeitsbeenfun (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    26
    Location:
    United States
    LOVE this story! <3
    April 1st, 2010 at 09:40pm
  • takemyhand;

    takemyhand; (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    awh, I like this a whole lot. :D
    April 1st, 2010 at 09:00pm
  • yourepretty

    yourepretty (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    United States
    Wow... This is already really, really good. I can tell I'm gonna loooove this. :) Can't wait for the next update!!
    March 31st, 2010 at 07:18am
  • b a r a k i t t e n

    b a r a k i t t e n (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    32
    Location:
    United States
    i love this! it's so good (: i subscribed, so please update soon!
    March 31st, 2010 at 03:44am