I Was Always In Front Of You - Comments

HAHAHAHAHAHA. Nab, "And they lived happily ever after. For now at least."

I love that line. HAHA. "For now at least". xD Best ending to any cliche I have ever read, lol!
HMM. A few grammatical mistakes, I see! I tell teacher! >O :P

But anyway, that was cute. :3 And I loved this part too, lol: "It wasn’t as though he could just say “I’m in love with you. Please be my boyfriend!” That was an instant kill confession."

SEE?! You should write more. ^-^ :D Sorry it took so long for me to read it, lol. I completely forgot. >.<

awww!!
i loved that it was so cute!! XD
i loved the line, Daniel was beautifully stunning and at the same time stunningly beautiful
awesome job! well done!! :)

Oh my!
How could you NOT have comments yet?
This was amazingly well written,
even though you had one of the most corniest lines ever,
I thought you made it better than cliches(:
It was so cute, and I was "Awhh"ing the whole way though<3333
You did a fantastic job doll<333
xo