Secrets, unrevealed - Comments

Hey hey now. Time to update! Please Madam?

I like this. :D You're a good writer.
The layout is rad too.

i really enjoyed this!

Ahhhh firsssssssst comment. I really like the beginning. It is so beautifully written. But I the rest was hard to read. Cut out un-necessary things and re-word some sentences. But I can't complain. This is brilliant and I love this.