holyshit! i love this! it made me laugh hysterically, and to be honest, im pretty sure some of the things the guys did in the chapter, they'd actually do. XD
you can tell you guys are very hyper in this story!!! But what I do suggest is taking out the smiley faces. They are just kind of random and you can't actually see what they are supposed to be. but other than that I love how energetic this story is!!
OMG this was so incredibly funnay! Brouhaha. YAY! I was so excited for yuu guys to post an update mwaha! And now you have. Ouhh cant wait to read the next chaps :D Love the moustache btw.
Whether she heard me or not I’ll probably never know, the woman was probably too busy trying to imagine Brian naked or something.
lmao this is so effin goooood! only thing is that you might wanna take out the =.= signs ya know? cuz there are so many effin rules on here so you might get your stories banned and we don't want that now do we?! UPDATE SOON!
I love it!!! It made my day better, despite the stuopid rain. I talk to my conscious all the time, and people look at me like I'm weird...I don't feel so alone anymore! lol Update!!!!!!
THIS IS AWESOME!!! it made me hyper just reading it and now i must off to go and find my partner in crime and enjoy skittles and red bull and muchly loads of alcohol :P YUM O.o sugar
This. Story. Is. GOD! Updaaaate! This is the captain to my crunch so update so I can have a good breakfast cereals! -Subbies- I love the randomness and the faceness and the squirellness and the Jimmyness and the Johnnyness and the nessness! :D! Raaaaaargghhhh! Dudley (Imaginary FIEND, not friend) and I want more updates!
i fucking love this story. it legit made me LOL a few times XD you two are fantastic! so far, its one of the best stories on this whole goddamn website!
Baby narwhal!!!! Jimmy better RUN! I am good friends with the Squirrel God, who is the cousin of the Dolphin God, who is the brother of the Birdy God.(btw she isn't very nice. Pecks at your head and EVERYTHING!! like omg it's soooo annoying) lol jk. The Squirrel God is a very nice entity. =D
I LOVE the first chapter. I like the way you have "the looks" on the like this one (my fave): O________O Lol!! I also like the nickname "Short Shit" for Johnny :D you two are great authors, I wish I could write funny like that but my stories are sorta more serious O_o Keep it up, will read second chapter!