That was amazing! I could tell you worked hard on it and I am sooo thankful for that. You don't know how much I've wanted some good Disturbed song writing, this was amazing. I really liked the song inclusion and there either weren't any spelling mistakes or I was so inticed with the plot I didn't notice. I especially liked the ending, dark and horrifying and how she's stuck looking at her reflection because it's almost like it's the only thing that will bring her peace 0.o Overall, it was really good :)
The lyrics were perfect for it, and the ending was absolutely stunning!!
Wow, wowwowowow.
I loved it.