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  • Patty Lovell

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    Wow. This was so well written!
    The lyrics were perfect for it, and the ending was absolutely stunning!!
    Wow, wowwowowow.
    I loved it.
    June 28th, 2010 at 09:59pm
  • miss fits

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    Oh, wow.
    I was blown away.
    It actually, in a sense, scared the crap out of me.
    Sort of like an urban legend. It was amazing.
    June 12th, 2010 at 07:03pm
  • Lover of Polka Dots

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    Dude yours is really good too! It's all... twisted and disturbed in the best kind of way considering what song you had.
    April 3rd, 2010 at 10:33pm
  • AprilJazmine

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    That was amazing! I could tell you worked hard on it and I am sooo thankful for that. You don't know how much I've wanted some good Disturbed song writing, this was amazing. I really liked the song inclusion and there either weren't any spelling mistakes or I was so inticed with the plot I didn't notice. I especially liked the ending, dark and horrifying and how she's stuck looking at her reflection because it's almost like it's the only thing that will bring her peace 0.o
    Overall, it was really good :)
    April 1st, 2010 at 01:41am
  • SmurfGirl

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    wow this was an awsome story. =)
    April 1st, 2010 at 12:49am