Fireflies - Comments

This is really well written!! I love it :)

it was AMAZING!!
it's was sooo good!
oh, love the banner! :D

ahahahah hey baby here's the smily face :)
i haven't read it right know but i will do! i'll promess
you know HW :S

I really liked that! I usually can't be drawn out of a really good book, which I am reading right now, and your story made me close it. The plot was really cute! I'm a hopeless romantic, I loved it.

Favorite line: "Do you want to dance with me?"

The only thing I would say is to proof read it one more time, there were only like two places where you forgot a word. I liked it a lot! Good job!

**Sorry, I liked their last kiss. Hahahaha :)

Ohh, sad. :| But, good sad, if there is such a thing. Ha. :)

I thought you did a really good job, and I liked the flashbacks. I think flashbacks really help out with stories -- especially one-shots, and they bring up all of the past emotions. You did a really good job with that. And this line was so… heartbreaking, because I kind of knew he wasn’t going to come back: "…One day, one day... I'm gonna make you Megan Jonas. I love you."

I liked the twist toward the end. :) My friend liked this guy named Jake. He was kind of a douche, not gonna lie. Haha, but that doesn’t really have anything to do with your lovely piece of literature.

I really, really lied their kiss after four years. I could really see it in my head. :) And the dance? I “Awed” out loud. Ha.

And, above all, I especially loved the very last line. :)

Great job.

OMG!! I love it! You should totally win! Great description and showing of emotions! :)