Derangement - Comments

moonyandpadfoot (150)

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Sooooo this is exciting already; what are they gonna find at that gas station?

I love your use of words and phrases and you write so well. And, well, it's a mystery. What's not to like? -subbed-

April 2nd, 2010 at 12:22am

jasonsudekis (100)

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We’ve got a nice two hour more hours.

That's the only mistake I saw.

As always, your writing is short, sweet, and to the point. I can't wait to see where this goes!

April 1st, 2010 at 12:44am

whiskey. (100)

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Interesting.
Is that picture you used from The Hitcher?
I loved that movie.
I don't have much to go on here,
I have a feeling that it's going to get started in the gas station. o.O

March 31st, 2010 at 10:39pm

single.for.the.night (100)

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This is super good.
Great job!

March 31st, 2010 at 10:26pm