Flat Line - Comments

I'm crying. Oh my god, Tara, that was so... so... emotional. The ending was the part that got me the most, the way Reita desperately tried to say goodbye. I don't know, I just... I just... .

The story itself was very straightforward. I loved the fact that Taka was able to confront the truth, unlike the others. It was just so... heart-wrecking. I couldn't stop reading, once I started. Ugh, this was so sad...

Brilliant.

Oh, Tara.

It's so emotional and raw. The narrative is classic and dialogue is natural. Everything seems so real. The ending adds to that - it's sudden, tragic, and breath-taking. Because that's how life is. You've really just put such truth into this. It hurts; it stays with you. It's brilliant.