that was great doll :) very cute and I loved all the flashbacks! I especially liked how you didn't reveal why they broke up until the end, doing that definitely kept me hooked on it up until the last sentence. I noticed some spelling and grammar errors here and there, but they were all very minor and didn't take away from the story any so I don't mind too much. But this was fabulously written and definitely gets two thumbs up and you get a virtual fresh baked cookie :)
April 1st, 2010 at 02:26am
