it was a really cute and good story but a little too touchy feely for them being brothers... not lovers. but I guess it's just that I see them as Dan and Hank... hockey players, and not Dan and Hank like in you story.
Even though I don't know who they are, I could feel the brotherly love between them. How much they care for one another. How one looked after the other one when he needed it, and then he looked after the one who looked after him when he needed it. It was really good. Well done.