If Only Love Had Found Us First - Comments

  • Hannahbelle.

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    HAH.
    I UNSUSCRIBED!
    But you told me you'd updated, so I'm suscribing again.
    How nice am I?
    :file:
    Yeah.
    I'm nice.

    SOOOOO...
    By regular updates, do you mean like, one every two months?
    I'll have to cyber whip you to get them more than once every six.
    Yeash, I am mean.

    I'M NICE AND MEAN, KAY?
    YOU CAN BE BOTH.
    Jeez. How rude are some people?
    Very, that's how.

    Hurry up and update again.
    Or I'll come to Canada and rape your ass.
    Heh, you think Scream is bad, you'll be looking for a new song to say is horrible.
    LAWL.

    I'm still 'on' depression, btw.
    Better than pot.
    -slaps hand over mouth-
    DID I SAY THAT OUT LOUD?
    I believe I did.
    I'M SORRY!
    :lmfao

    You love me really. :)
    May 31st, 2008 at 06:35pm
  • Death-Of-Beauty

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    Whao.
    Friggin' amazing!
    April 8th, 2008 at 03:30am
  • epps

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    *dances around like an idiot* loved the up-date *continues to dance*
    more when you can please *starts a new dance*
    February 24th, 2008 at 09:48am
  • epps

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    *dances around like an idiot* loved the up-date *continues to dance*
    more when you can please *starts a new dance*
    February 24th, 2008 at 09:48am
  • MissCandy!K

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    Yay! An update! *Dances*

    I loved it.
    Clap
    February 22nd, 2008 at 08:51pm
  • I Think Ur A Contra

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    Excellent second chapter. :]

    Can't wait to read more!

    xoxox Adalia
    February 22nd, 2008 at 08:13pm
  • Hannahbelle.

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    That was okay.
    I guess.
    jkjk.
    It was good.
    But short.
    -_-
    Don't take so long next time!
    Or I shall find you and kill you sloooooooooooowly.

    =]
    February 22nd, 2008 at 05:54pm
  • Desensitized

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    Ahaa, it was worth the wait.
    I absolutely love the amount of description you give,
    and I'm really looking forward to more.

    Smile
    February 22nd, 2008 at 05:32am
  • Cherry Road

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    *NEW READER*

    I just...I have to say, first off, that this is the first semi-Frikey/Frerard that I'm subscribing to.
    I'm not used to it, so bear with me, okay? xD
    Normally my comments are better than this one.

    I like your writing style, especially your descriptions. And you know how to incorporate thoughts and feelings into the text in a way that I haven't mastered yet, so that's a big plus for you. ;]

    I also haven't found any spelling/grammar mistakes so far (and I'm normally pretty picky), so you've also got that going for you.

    I like where the story is headed, what with this chapter and I'm assuming the next one (at least) being completely a memory of Frank's when he first met Gerard. I love it when we get flashbacks. :D

    Anyway, sorry for the shitty comment, mine aren't usually this horrible.
    I'm hoping you keep to your word and update regularly from now on, I'm really anxious as to what's in store.

    Keep up the absolutely AMAZING writing that you have. Smiley

    <3 C
    February 22nd, 2008 at 03:48am
  • Zacky V!

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    I just read and thought it was great
    *subscribed*
    When will you be writing more?
    January 8th, 2008 at 05:25am
  • Desensitized

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    Sounds great so far!
    I'd definitely like to keep reading.
    Smile
    November 18th, 2007 at 10:51am
  • epps

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    great first chapter, im definatly subscribing
    November 17th, 2007 at 08:57am
  • MissCandy!K

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    *Is in love* *subcribes*

    Write moreeeee!!!! Please?
    Lovelovelove.
    xxx
    November 16th, 2007 at 03:05am
  • xXxlikepiXiedustxXx

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    amazing first chapter!
    i'm subscribing.
    i love how you made gerard all gruff and stuff with frank.
    it was very cute!
    November 15th, 2007 at 08:29am
  • Shane Crump.

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    greatness more when you can please i'm so subscribing!
    November 15th, 2007 at 06:53am