I think that the story is creative. I don't agree with the above comment because it's not like you're saying that God sucks or anything like that. You are simply putting a dream into words. I think you should continue.
uh, i think this is a total mockery of God, Heaven and angels. Get some respect, and don't bring the Bible and God into a stupid story like this. An angel would never knock a human up, get over your so called inspirational dream already!