OK! I finally managed to read through EVERYTHING!!! It's SOOO much! But I got absolutely hooked! I love that you are making Nathan such an total asshole that nobody really likes any more. It takes guts to do that because you can loose many readers. But I'm extremely happy that he's starting to become nice again =) I'm hoping that Taylor and Nathan will come back together, for Taylor's sake. He seems so much more messed up then Nathan ever was! (I know... sounds weird, but his absolute schizophrenic responses are making me extremely worried...) It's nerve wrecking not to know what's happening inside Taylor's head!
Well, I'm in hope that you will update again soon! Keep up the good work! <3
This is so messed up. I couldn't believe what a hard-ass Nathan turned out to be. How utterly messed up he became himself. I wanted to cry and to throw my netbook across the room. I was so aggravated with his behavior. I literally had to get off the computer when I reached chapter 19 because I had had it with him. I couldn't believe he tried cocaine; the stupid little fucker. But, as I read through the rest of it the following morning, I became enticed with his character once again. Deep down, he was the same old Nathan. He was too caring to actually hurt anyone even though his words had sprung many leaks in his relationships with others. I couldn't believe what he was doing to Taylor; that poor baby. He was so shook up. How could Nathan be so cruel? Oh yes. He wasn't in his right state of mind. I'm glad he's semi back to normal. He's halfway there. He just needs to learn to control his anger and raping needs. In the beginning, it seemed like you wanted to make him seem as if he was becoming almost a nymphomaniac. Am I wrong? xD Anyway, I can't wait for updates and for more Taylor and Nathan LOVE and not RAPE. ;D <3 Lovely job so far.
After an excruciatingly long leave of absence, I'm back to commenting on your beautiful piece of work, even though all of that was a lot to take in in the span of one day. I love it still, though I am extremely depressed by it. I cannot believe Nathan did that to Taylor. =/
I hope they can fix this. I miss how cute and fluffy they used to be in the prequel. Now I think I'm gonna go back to it and reread it after I post this xD
What I like about this story? Everything xD I honestly can't pinpoint what exactly it is about it that I like. -Well, there's one thing: the character development. I think it's really cool to read about everyone grown up and changed (and it's cool to see that Maryann didn't turn out to be as creepy as she seemed in the prequel).
But, question? Is Nathan literally mnemophobic, or is he just in major denial?