"Why don't we just call it quits and accept we both like each other."- awwww!!! I love it! Yeesh look at me, commenting freakin' four times in a row. Just a big fan is all =D This story was so cute and awesome- I love Teri! She is so likable and dorky! Ioved how she, like, cried and blubbered all the time. Hehe, it was honestly so endearing! And Kieran is still smokin' hott. Period. I'm gonna go read your other stories now!! =D=D=D
*Deep breath... siiiiigh* Thanks for giving Matt a nice out. I totally thought that when he was drawing something, he was drawing something for Teri and was going to give it to her and, like, blow her away and make her think 'hm... am I making the right choice??' Lol, I was kinda hoping. For like, another twist. And then the boys have to really duke it out for her love with romantic move after romantic move (and then I would be a happy-happy, selfish reader). But ah well. C'est la vie. I'll just have to obsess over the next story you write =) p.s. Kieran's still smokin hott <3<3<3
Hehe! I totally know moms that flirt with their daughters' boyfriends! It's... weird. And awkward... But funny as crap in your story! (plus! Kieran's in her room! bow-chika-bow-wow (<-- that's porn music)) Sorry, I'm a little very strung out right now. I still <3 your story though. I'd love to see it go on and read about Teri and Keiran's relationship (just for selfish, giggling pleasure hehe). <3<3
Confession: I pretended I was Teri when Kieran kissed her. Is that pathetic?? Maybe lol, just a little. But he just sounds so hoottt and incredible... "I was in my own little world where streets were named after catastrophic happenings and cars ran purely on shock"<-- brilliant writing. You might not have liked this chapter, but I went back and re-read that line a few times because I liked it so much. Update sooOoon! I hope you're feeling better! (ps, give Matt a happy ending ok? Because, uh, yeah, Teri needs to be with Kieran now, so... yeah =D)
Whoa! I didn't know the boys felt that intensely about her! ... that's awesome! Well, to read. It sucks to be Teri, stuck in that kinda situation. Team Kieran ftw!!! ... although I don't want him to punch Matt... I kinda like Matt too... Still! Kieran's sex-ay. Update soooOoooOoon! =D (and feel better!! =( being sick suucks. at least you don't have to go to school... lol, don't forget to drink some tea and/or lots of water <3)
hmm... well i don't like these sort of situations........ i've been in one... half of the people i know have been in one..... but seriously......... she's not sure? ok understandable........ but how can she make a move on poor matt when she just doesn't know who she loves?!?!?!? what if she decides she wants Kieran in the end? .....if i were her friend i'd probably be scolding her..
anyway.... on to better things... =) i just subscribed!!!!!!! update soon! ...i wanna see HOW she'll get out of this situation.......
whoahoho! Go Teri, it's your birthday! (wow, lame. moving on from that) I love it, she just grabbed the front of his jacket and yanked him in. Like, how can she make an honest comparison if she doesn't kiss both of them?- Oh! So there you go! Now, she needs to kiss Kieran and he needs to be majorly hott when they kiss! <3
omg omg omg she should totally end up with kieran!!!! he is so much better then matt no offense to matt i guess i only like the sweet mysterious type n i dont lime the pushy blunt type of guys cuz he seems sort of annoying?? but whoever she ends with is good enough for me but she n kieran seem to have the perfect type of love u dont really see anywhere hopefully kieran gets her and not matt thats my opinion :)
Gah I'm crazy! As much as I'm in love with Kieran, I really really wanted Matt to kiss her... Whoa. I think I just completely related to Teri's dilemma. Whoa. =D Update soon!
Me again! Now you're doing cliffhangers! You know, it's one thing when I do it, cuz I know what's going to happen next in my story. I don't know what's going to happen next in your story!! So this is what it feels like? Hm. Rather unpleasant =P Oh and "Turn that frown upside down!" he laughed, using his fingers to upturn the other side of my mouth. I playfully slapped away his hand and stepped outside. <--l.m.F.a.o. perfect!
Awww =( She waited all day for him?? That's so sad and a tad pathetic eh? (but juicy pathetic, good writing pathetic, make no mistake =D) I'd probably wait all day for Kieran too tho <3
i really love this story. i wonder who teri will end up with! i'm guessing she'll realize that even though keiran might be perfect, maybe matthew is perfect for her? either way i want her to end up with keiran ahha! i can't wait for the next update! you've been updating a lot by the way, i really appreciate that!
He's gonna do it, he's gonna do it, he's leaning in, leaning in... GAAH! Kiss on the cheek! You evil evil writer =D (although who am I to talk for leaving ppl dangling eh? pfft). Anyway, excellent-o chapter!! I flew through reading it (the lovely writing made it easy) and it was over too quick <3<3
Whoa. Is Keiran based on someone real? Because I want him to mail order him to my continent! He's perfect. I enjoy him. (... I enjoy him?? Wtf. Anyway) =D Update sooon with more of their daate!!