Some Like It Hot... - Comments

Wonderful.
I liked this, quite a lot.

This is absolutely wonderful, m'dear. Nice job! :]

Only one word can describe this...amazing. You did a superb job, and Indie-A is right, this is one of the best entries we've gotten. Between you and me (and anyone else who reads this XD) you've got a very good chance at placing. Wonderful, just wonderful.

This is so cute. I loved it. And I'm picky about my slashes.
I love how realistic the dialogue was. Realistic dialogue is hard to write. You did a great job with it!
And their personalities were also pretty good. The only thing I didn't like was that Matt didn't seem to have much of one. I'm not sure if you meant for that or not.
Anyway, I still loved it. And I'd love it even more if you continued it. This would make a great story.

Awhhh, I really like this(:
It was really cute and sweet,
and I like how Fazzi is so innocent. xD
Lmao.
Anywho.
And it made me giggle and smile. ;D
Amazing job<3
xo

:DDD
You're a splendid writer!
That was just too adorable!
I can't even think of anything you did wrong.
There weren't any errors from what I can remember, so really good job on proof reading.
The only thing I can think of that would help make your writing seem a bit professional is when you type numbers like 2, preferably write it out as two or 100 as one hundred.
That's it though! This is one of the best entries we've gotten in my opinion, so good luck and thanks for entering:D

Awww!
This was just too cute!
It made me smile, giggle and go 'get in there!' so it's all gooood :D