The Kids Don't Stand A Chance - Comments

  • ParaMuseChem

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    I know this story was done ages ago, but I just wanted to let you know that I finished reading it the other day and absolutely loved it the whole way through. I'm addicted to all of your stories right now. :)
    January 12th, 2011 at 02:39am
  • tq6776

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    I loved this story so much!
    I loved how you ended it...like it wasnt like and they lived happily ever after but it showed that they had thier problems but they are going to work threw them!
    Can't wait to see what new stories you have in store:-)
    October 9th, 2010 at 10:49pm
  • BeggingForChanges

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    Gah, I can't believe this is over. I loved every single moment of it, though <3
    October 9th, 2010 at 07:00pm
  • Grade.A.Catastrophe

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    lovedd it :]
    October 9th, 2010 at 06:44pm
  • CherryxColoredxSkies

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    ...I can't believe this is over. But it was a great story. I loved everything about it, and I like how you ended it off. I agree with nto making a sequel, I like to think they have a happily ever after. Good luck with the rest of your stories, I'll be keeping an eye on ya :)
    October 9th, 2010 at 06:28am
  • troubleinatanktop

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    I'm pretty satisfied in the ending. (: I think you're making the right decision in not making a sequel; I'd love to see what's to come for them, but I think it's best to just leave them as they are, you know?

    Anyways, splendid job. (:

    <3
    October 9th, 2010 at 06:01am
  • Grade.A.Catastrophe

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    alll lovee it! update r u still writing this story? :]] i hope soo
    October 6th, 2010 at 01:09am
  • BeggingForChanges

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    Yayyayyayyayyayyayyayyay!!!!

    ::D
    September 21st, 2010 at 09:31pm
  • outofreach

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    Ohhh he forgave her n_n yay so sweet :}
    I hope he isn't doing it as some joke or something and that they last :3
    September 21st, 2010 at 11:21am
  • itsahit

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    That chapter made me so happy. I think they're so cute together. I will read whatever you write.
    September 21st, 2010 at 09:10am
  • tq6776

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    Ah! I love this!
    Like I have this small feeling that hes playing her:-(
    Like I really hope he isnt!
    I love how frequent you have been updating!
    Update soon ;-)
    September 21st, 2010 at 05:02am
  • troubleinatanktop

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    My eyes, like, brimmed with tears during that conversation. Update soon! I really want to see how their whole, like ... reconnection goes. (:
    Good job. < 33
    September 19th, 2010 at 11:27pm
  • outofreach

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    oooooooooooo I need more please :3
    September 19th, 2010 at 05:29pm
  • itsahit

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    That was amazing, I laughed when he was like, "she just lays there." This made me smile so much. Oh Zack...
    September 19th, 2010 at 11:44am
  • CherryxColoredxSkies

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    OMG I LOVED THAT UPDATE!!!
    post asap!!!! I NEED to know wht happens next.
    September 19th, 2010 at 08:52am
  • tq6776

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    Hold on a second...im kinda speechless...

    Okay, so I deffinitly didnt see that converstaion happening at all!
    BUT it was an amazingly amazing chapter and deffinitly my favorite!
    And when he said his girlfriend was bad in bed I laughed so hard...
    This is so amazing and like I cant believe you left it there:-(
    Update soo please:-)
    September 19th, 2010 at 04:27am
  • BeggingForChanges

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    <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3

    THEY NEED TO GET BACK TOGETHER.

    Just saying.
    September 19th, 2010 at 04:26am
  • troubleinatanktop

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    Ohmygod, that's so sweet! I really wish he could just get over the whole thing. It was fouuur years ago. I at least hope they can be friends, since he has a girlfriend now ; and though I don't like that, I'm not going to, like, wish bad things upon her (whether or not she is fictional. xD ). I'm a new reader ; I started yesterday and have just worked my way up. You're a great writer. Update soon! <3
    September 15th, 2010 at 03:29am
  • BeggingForChanges

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    Look! Zack's not being a douche!! ::D Now, we just need to get rid of Nicole or whatever her name it.
    September 13th, 2010 at 10:39pm
  • outofreach

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    oh my god that was so sweet of Zack :3
    September 13th, 2010 at 07:57pm