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  • DemolitionLover.

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    I need more x]]

    xxxxxxxx

    -Subscribes-
    January 2nd, 2008 at 05:01am
  • MyrMyr

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    O.O what happens then? I want to know!!!
    great story by the way :D
    December 17th, 2007 at 02:32am
  • XDanni-DaydreamX

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    Just read all the chapters, I really like it =D
    November 24th, 2007 at 11:00pm
  • riri.leyley.

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    please update><
    i really wanna know what happens!
    November 18th, 2007 at 05:57pm
  • Dark Illusion

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    omg why leave it like that??
    i wanna know what happens!!!!!!!!!!!
    more soon plz??
    *subscribes*
    November 18th, 2007 at 05:44pm
  • Sia Golden

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    Ditto as above with all the grammar and stuff, but I'm sure that that isn't what you want to hear.
    Anyways, I really liked it. Good job. [;
    November 18th, 2007 at 05:38pm
  • Flynn Rider

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    Still. I like your story <3 I read all 5 chapters and I like it :)
    HAHAHA, Frank Iero . Shit, rambling about mcr...
    SORRY - but I like your storry, so I shall subcribe
    November 18th, 2007 at 05:16pm
  • XxmusicjunkiexX

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    Yeah I know what you mean. However I found that its easier to write the chapter and then check the speeling on microsoft word!
    Just one of my random tips!
    November 15th, 2007 at 11:48pm
  • eatmorebananas

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    *Points to comment before mine*
    I think so too. You can't go wong with good grammer!
    It's a good story, keep with it!
    November 15th, 2007 at 11:28pm
  • Break the Silence

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    this looks good but you should use proper capitilization and stuff like that. (it looks more professional and the moderators will approve of it) keep writing.
    November 15th, 2007 at 11:10pm
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