I think she should be more worried about the mental health of the baby and how close the genes are. The baby could have retardation and such, so its something she should take into consideration.
I just have to say, her brother gives me the heebie jeebies. Like seriously, what a creeper! Anywho, I feel kinda bad for her, you know? Pregnant at 17 is one thing, but pregnant to her brother. That’s messed up.
I like that you were able to quickly brush up on why they were together in the first place too.
Strangly I like it and I pray she aborts Im very Anti Abortion but in cases like incest where they baby has soooo many risks ugh... Kevin is awesome ;] The sex is a little abusive tho, but good over all
oh whoa well that was a .... interesting thing lol well i hope they kep the baby even tho its wrong looking at the pic im asuming im right xD n omg mike is leaving soon aww :( loved the update :D n pweeasee update sooner xDDDD
Fantastic idea, really good storyline The title just had that faint hope of disbelief in it but it shocked in the first couple of paragraphs. Lived up to my expectations Well done.
I just wanted to offer some input on the sex scene. It was way too brutal. Furiously biting someones nipples black and purple is not erotic. It's abusive. It would be extremely painful and torturous. In fact, most women would smack a guy who even attempted it. I know some girls like it rough, but that was far beyond rough. It was unrealistic.
Also the one thing guys tell girls when giving a blowjob is NOT to use their teeth. When you said she scraped her teeth down his manhood I cringed. That would have hurt him considerably.
I'm just telling you these things from experience, in the hopes of helping you write more realistic sex scenes. I hope I do not offend. If I do, feel free to take my words with a grain of salt.