Rivalry - Comments

This reminded me of Tokio Drift

Alright, the descriptions are beyond amazing, all the race was played in my head so flawlessly and I felt as if I was in the movies

The plot is something so unique; I've never read anything in here that pertains racing and such, and this one is just so interesting.

As Sam said, I love how you portrayed their friendship; these are normal guys, always competing, but, at the end, they are friends and nothing can get in the way.

It was so funny to read, specially with all the teasing and such Really perfectly written.

Bb, I loved this.
I legitimately had a giggle at the last line.
I love that you showed that they've been best friends for ages.
It really showed here.

Kudos, bb. <333

The last line was hilarious!
I had a feeling he would say something like that

Anyway this was awesome Sempai <333

So. The last line was my favorite ever.

I love the friendship in this, and how even though they're rivals, you can tell they're just playing around.

Tarabb, I love this. <333