Dear Ben - Comments

"ok, bye."

I love this, thanks.

I never expect to laugh when I read these updates.
Today I did, and it was marvelous.
Haha, they fucked. It's so great when things are so plainly written.
Amazing.

Ben is like... if he were real, he'd be one of my favorite people. I think he sort of is already.

hahaaha same here with the fucking.
i love it. and i love ben. and olivia.

poor kids, i would fuck if i were them.

HA!
I laughed so hard when you said they fucked because I didn't see that coming.
She doesn't even seem the type to say fuck! :))
I love this story so much >< I'm sad to see it go..

But why? This is so great.
Not every story has to end with a happy couple..in real life more often then not, it doesn't.
Besides that I've had to deal with watching someone you love die of cancer and it's a lot
different then most people would expect. It's more like watching a movie than everything
like real like stopped when they got sick and you just have to sit and watch everything play out.
It's not a nice feeling but that's life.

This story does make me sad, but I don't think I mind being sad after I read it. The world needs sad stories sometimes, I think. I really do enjoy this, but I can also understand if you don't enjoy it as much as you used to.

I just hope you finish it, not to be pushy or anything.

this makes me sad too. but i really like it even though you don't.

This makes me sad.

^^ I LOVE BEN TOO! : ]
So... moving onward, I think I want to say that I think the cliche element to this story works. Most of the time it doesn't, but that's because those stories tend to be poorly written. Just saying.
I think Ben is such a marvelous boy. I mean, really. He's just great, and knowing he is going to die makes me want to like him less because I know that when it happens I will be very disappointed. At the same time, I think it has to be done. He's just too great of a boy, and all the great boys go away too soon.
Mannn... I love coming online to find updates like these. It makes me feel like I'm not wasting my life away on the computer. Ha ha.
Thanks for the update.

OH MA GAWD I LOVE BEN SO MUCH

i want to cry. he is such.. i don't know, a hopeless soul. but i love him.
and poor olivia. in love with a dying boy. that's got to be tough.

I think I love this chapter.

Ha! Just try and stop me from reading! :P
Update soon. If you kill Ben... Well I'm not sure what I'll do.

Yo, nice update, my man!

Dude, I want to see more of Ben, you know? Like, them talking and such.

Kloveyoubye.

WOAH! I wasn't expecting leukemia.
That caught me off guard. And you know...
I don't think Ben is being a dick. Well, maybe a little for not telling anyone, but you know. He has his reasons.
I still like this very much, and I shall keep reading.

BEN!

this is really good! :)

P.S. 'Inconsistent' & 'fuck you' are synonymous for 'why the hell did you stand me up tonight?

^ Best ever.

Elissa, this is the best. I'm serious. The best.

I love all of the P.S's. They all make me laugh, or want to cry, or do something emotional with myself.

The scratched out And I just want to fu--.. made me laugh so hard.

Update, dude. Immediatly.

oooooooooooooooooooooh baby
i like this, i like it aloooot.
it's like insight on the teenage girl's mind.
i don't think we boys are all bad but
some girls are just hard to read
and we are as afraid as rejection
as girls are in case you didn't know..
js.

BUT WHEN YOU GONNA UPDATE? (:

^brain fart. I typed Ellen, but I meant Olivia. Stupid me... mixing up names.