This is different, which is good. I mean, the parents know as does the sister. And in most of the others, they don't know. Originality is great. I like the laughter between them and the humour between the siblings. It's nice reading something different. I like this. Well done.
Just wondering, did you only want to submit these three chapter into the contest? Or are you going to write more for the contest? Cause I need to know for certain before I read and comment.....again..
me and my friends were talking about what would happen if two brothers were in love with eachother. i feel like some weird psychic or something like that. but anyway... love the story! im subscribing