Alone. - Comments

Judging has begun! The description of the street from the first line draws the reader in. Strong descriptive words were present throughout the piece. The writing was impressive from the first paragraph. I adore Greek mythology! Great subject matter! The conversation between brother and sister was priceless! I caught a hint of love in the air surrounding Ares and his female warrior. Maybe not a budding romance, but more of a fatherly love. (I called it!) Sad ending, but not tear-worthy.

I'm quite in awe of this to be completely honest. It flowed so well and captivated me from the start. Very, very good. :)

This is extremely well written, it was very emotional towards the end.
I enjoyed reading every word of it.
It was very creative most definitely. I loved how you incorporated each of Ares symbols along with Athena.
Phenomenal entry!

ALICE!

If you wrote this in thirty minutes, give me your muse for five.

It's amazing.