Judging has begun! The description of the street from the first line draws the reader in. Strong descriptive words were present throughout the piece. The writing was impressive from the first paragraph. I adore Greek mythology! Great subject matter! The conversation between brother and sister was priceless! I caught a hint of love in the air surrounding Ares and his female warrior. Maybe not a budding romance, but more of a fatherly love. (I called it!) Sad ending, but not tear-worthy.
June 26th, 2010 at 03:20am