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  • halofox17

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    please update soon :)
    April 25th, 2010 at 12:57am
  • WarDrums

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    ooohhh, lucy knows!!!
    awesome chapter =P
    April 24th, 2010 at 10:54pm
  • Stiles Stilinski

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    This is lovely. I can't hardly wait for the next chapter. XD
    I think I wanna see Gerard and Kath have sexy time soon... haha. x]
    Anyway, I couldn't help but notice that you would sometimes use she if it's Mikey or Gerard, so I would just like to point that out. :)

    This is a really great story. More soon please? :D
    April 24th, 2010 at 08:27pm
  • londoncalling

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    AH! i loved this update <333 heheheeeee he likes her he wants to kiss her and love her do do do doo bop be boop. XD sorry. but im excited. please update <3
    April 24th, 2010 at 06:29pm
  • atomika wave.

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    oi, this story's definitely going somewhere!
    give me an update soon, yeah?
    :)
    April 24th, 2010 at 05:39pm
  • lil.rock.chic

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    OMG! LOVE IT!!!! ITS GOLD, KEEP IT UP!!
    April 23rd, 2010 at 12:27am
  • A Perfect Sonnet

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    Haha. That'll be a nice Monday morning class "By the way sir, here's your jacket. Thanks for lending to me" I can see that going down well XD
    April 21st, 2010 at 11:48am
  • factory girl

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    this is quite cute.
    just check your spelling a little more there are a few errors.
    update again soon :D
    April 21st, 2010 at 11:04am
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    i like this story!!!! update soon =) i also saw kick ass, it was a funny movie lol XD
    April 21st, 2010 at 02:01am
  • halofox17

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    please please please update soon :3
    April 21st, 2010 at 12:53am
  • Zacky Baker.

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    His jackett :DD
    Mikey needs to be nice to Lucy x]
    April 20th, 2010 at 11:20pm
  • trappedxinxreality

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    i usually dont like teacher/student fics, but this one is awwwsomeee!!!!! loove it!!! <3
    April 20th, 2010 at 11:04pm
  • Perfect_Lil_Princess

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    awsome update cant wait to read more =]
    April 20th, 2010 at 10:36pm
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    awww I love how Katherines and Gerards relationship is going, its not rushed which is a great thing. Ooh could they all have another get together the next chapter maybe this time at Gerards and Mikeys :D This story is brilliant xxx
    April 20th, 2010 at 06:51pm
  • A Perfect Sonnet

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    ^^^ XD makes total sense. They have 'Y''s in them. Destiney at it's finest XD

    I agree though. IF Lucy is actually wanting to be around them and not being a bitch like earlier.
    But still.
    How cute!
    April 20th, 2010 at 11:20am
  • Zacky Baker.

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    Lucyy and Mikeyy :DDDDDD
    It's meant to be cause they both have a 'Y' in their names x]
    April 20th, 2010 at 01:53am
  • WarDrums

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    ooohhh, mikey and lucy sitting in a tree..hehe =P
    i wud have made u a banner but photoshop decided to be a bitch and deleted itself =(
    awesome chapter though =P
    April 19th, 2010 at 05:29pm
  • factory girl

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    i just found this story and read it all so far. i really like it. the chapters are abit short but very good
    please update again soon
    :D
    April 19th, 2010 at 01:26pm
  • drownedXsorrows

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    You're amazing! :)
    April 19th, 2010 at 11:00am
  • A Perfect Sonnet

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    Wow, that's a really pretty piece.

    Have you seen the movie The Piano? If not, look up 'The Heart Asks Pleasure First' by Michael Nyman. It's amazing.

    Lovely chapter
    April 19th, 2010 at 09:56am