Dirty Desire - Comments

Oh my gosh this was awesome~

dang, so hard to chose my favorite part. I love it all

Kakashi.

Okay, descriptions are marvelous as per usual. You know you have your way with them and how easily you can make the reader play the scenes as if they were part of a movie. And this combined with a sex scene... It turned out fucking amazing and real.

To be honest, I really liked that you made the girl anonymous Give the fangirls a chance

Amazing story!

He threw his head back as a low groan escaped his throat, thrown back into reality full force by his want to be satisfied.

He couldn't take it anymore, and his right hand moved quickly to it's destination in answer to his want.

I agree with Taka completely. Just, holy shit. This was more than unf, this was... just... unf.

Looks like someone is developing great sex-description skills.

Okay, you asked for my favorite part.
Well, see, I'd tell you if I could choose.
But honestly, the image of Kakashi jerking off?
Not unpleasant.
Dear Jesus. This was.....unf.