This story has a good premise. The tale of the crazy kid sent away is one that goes too often untold. I'm aware that part of the point is that the protagonist is very unreasonable, which makes sense because hardcore anorexics are usually sick in their minds. However, there are a lot of things in here that are ridiculously unrealistic. If she had actually killed her grandmother by pushing her down the stairs, it wouldn't be a clinic for curing anorexia she'd be being forced to stay at, you know? That sort of thing.
This was a really great start to the story, the characters have been introduced well, and it was just down right awesome! My gosh, well done on this. I loved it :]
November 16th, 2007 at 04:02pm
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