Gah! This story has sincerely grasped my attention and I cannot WAIT for more of this story! It's one of the first entirely grammatical and well written pieces I've come to enjoy on here. (: can't wait for more updates.
Okay, I'm sorry, I should write something more useful than that. Uhm, there's a little typo, but apart from that, the story had me riveted the whole freaking time. Lovely.
I have a very, very good feeling about that boy... and that might be a little bit because I'm biased toward people named Oliver. [: