“Fabulous. Don’t I LOOK fabulous?” The boys we’re still looking at the audience as she kept on babbling on about her self. “DON’T I?!”
“Oh! Yeah! Sure!” Frank said getting frightened by the loud screech of that woman.
“Now, I’m loving the new look with the Black Carnival - ”
“Parade! You moron!” A member from the crowd jumped out of her seat.
“Security!” She hummed cheerfully. “Back to me, So yes I love the Black Parade look with the all black and white stripes. And - ” Frank pulled off Gerard’s Hoodie to reveal his new hair.
“Oh My God! I - I mean, well doesn’t that look… dashing?”
new chapter!!! yay! Girls revenge great story write more n try n get ur friend on Mibba :mrgreen: edit: SMILIE OVERLOAD!!!!! (<may be a bit dramatic ah well)
thnx 4 the profile comment i'd already read it quickly but then my mum came in so i couldn't comment i hope youre writing another chapter cos now im hooked on the story.update, update!!!! (please) :D
Thank you guys! We weren't really sure how it was going to turn out, but i'm glad we got some good feedback! I'll make sure to give the other author your comments.
*dies of laughter* rotfllmfao that was one of the funniest stories I have ever read! rankieardkeyob I know what it means now! if only it wasn't a one-shot...