oh em gee that actually creeped me out cause i'm still scared of the dark rofl (yeah told ya i'm scared of everything) and whenever i sleep by myself i have to have some sort of light in my room...i don't mind darkness when i've got friends sleeping over and stuff lol
you should write more :) and try making your next ones a little bit longer cause this is good stuff
I like :):)
you should keep writting them :D