You're in Ruins - Comments

So sad. I feel bad for everyone involved, even if they do have their selfish moments. No one ever expects their selfish moments to end like that, and I can just imagine how she will eventually begin to blame herself, when it's not really her fault.

Very sad and touching.

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And I lover your writing.
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Soooo sad :( But so immensely good! I like how you've carefully thought through how everything interlinks etc, and the differing perspectives slot really nicely into one another - all working together to tell a very creative and effective story :) Looking forward to the rest!

This is a amazing story. It is a amazing plot. You have a great emotions and descriptions. =] I love this story.

Awwwww.

Why must it be so sad? Still, I loved it, and I love you. So yeah.

Erik's a bit of an ass, though...but I like him. Do you mind if I call him that?

Oh wow. I expected Mandi's story to come before the guy she was making out with. It's a nice surprise though. I like what I don't expect. XP

I'm sure this of your own doing, and part of the character, but I feel the need to point out that Erik is very obsessed with how pretty girls are. Like, really obsessed. Can I call him a jerk for that? Because I am.

You're making me feel so bad for these characters! :'(

Oh wow. I feel so bad for her. It's not her fault, but she's blaming herself. I know how that is, and it's not fun. I haven't even had a friend die that I felt responsible for, but I know it's not fun. That's got to be much worse.

Great chapter.

Awh! That was sad!

I actually was just listening to an audiobook (The Adoration of Jenna Fox-great book!) and she said to her mom, "I killed her, mom. I killed my best friend."

Great update! I loved it!

Love it!

Great writing, dear. I am subscribed, and want more.

That was so sad. I feel bad for her, though I suppose she deserved it. She was, after all, driving drunk. Still sad.

Since the summary has a bunch of people, and this was only one, I'm guessing that there is more coming?

Heeeey :) Firstly, please carry on writing - I am extremely eager to find out what happens! Secondly, I think you're description is very effective and your portrayal of her drunken state was really good - I was feeling dizzy just reading it. Love the way you've set everything up :) Keep going!