Higher, Faster, Stronger - Comments

Okay, I know you finished this story a while ago, but I sat down about an hour ago, and time flied by as I read it. It was an amazing story, well written, and it included a lot of detail. You didn't get sloppy on actual human reactions, and it was just a great story and a joy to read. Thanks for putting it out there!~

Dude.....i just read my own comment and I sound like a crazy person who doesn't know how to spell to save her life.....im really sorry about the long comment.....my bad

I LOVE this story!
I just can't even exspress my feelings on how much I love it because i'm still in shock over how good it was.......
The chapters were all well written because you used wonderful grammer and strung all of you sentences together perfectly!
Every paragraph flowed into the next and gave the story a good rthymn that you never strayed from
Also, the overall plot of the story and the chacters were genius! I was thrilled to see that you gave everyine their own personailty and made sure they were all different too,
The concept was brillant by the way.
We had a girl who played on our school team last year and she was really good but people were still surprised because she was a girl and all.
I'm a fellow sports lover (i don't know the specifics of every sport though) and I was glad to find someone, a girl!, who liked them too and wrote such a good story!
You brought drama into the plot that didn't completly foucas on football and that really was brillant!
I know I'm ranting and I'm sorry but this story was just so good I had to tell you!
I'm done know though(almost).....
I FREAKING LOVED IT!
I stayed up until about 4:00 on May 28 or 29....so I could finish reading this,
AND I WAS GLAD I DID!
thank you so much for writing such a good story! I would have subscribed and wrote comments after every chapter if I had found this story beforehand but......oh well
loved it
I'm done ranting now <3

I really loved this story. I'm sorry I didn't comment, I kept saying I would comment when I caught up, but I just caught up, and you ended it. So, if you ever write a sequel or a story like this, hit me up. I'll definitely read it.

Amazing! :)

Dude, this was an awesome story! Sorry I didn't comment more, I was just so absorbed into reading each chapter! It's really, really good. A top notch story for sure!!! =D

Awe, i really did like this stori.
I'll be sure to check out your next story as well.

This is normally when i would say update soon but i can't now
so.......

THANKS FOR ALL OF THE UPDATES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lol :)

oh my gosh the ending was great
super awesome story=)

LOVE THIS STORY!! deff one of the best and really sad its over. you're an amazing writer, so keep writing! :D

Aww. That was the perfect ending to this story. I loved it from beginning to end. You're such an amazing writer. :)

Awweh, I just might open a Ramen stand. (: Haha!
It was amazing. "Like Vitamin Water," here I come!

NO! It ended... Well... IT WAS AWESOME!!! Loved the story till the end. Obviously everyone had a happy ending. And I will continue to read Like Vitaminwater... Sounds fun!
Bye!

yay! im happy he's back!! i love this but im sad its mostly over :(

awwww. that was so cute.
im sad that its over :(

Go out with a bang. I like it.
I'm sad the story is practically over, but it was amazing and I'm glad I had to privilege to read it. :D

Awe its over.... :(
But im glad that it ended with a promise and a kiss

LOVED IT!!!!

yay!!!!!!!!!! he's back!!! i'm so happy he's back :D
but im sad its almost over :(

I found this story like, an hour or so ago and I've been reading it ever since.
It's so good! I'm not even a sporty person (I'm sort of hopeless when it comes to anything that involves sports) but I really got into this.
Amazing story so far :)

derek's story resembels sasuke's story from naruto:))
but it's great anyway
keep on writing

glad he's gone :P
i love this story :D