Light Years Away - Comments

Wow, this was beautiful. <3

This is so beautiful, man. Reading this was like looking things that have happened in my own life. Every single word. The emotion, the longing, just pure and simple - amazing.

There are no other words for your work. I love it.

Oh my, I loved this. It made me feel. Which trust me when I say, that most of the stories I've found on Mibba in the past couple months haven't made me feel that way at all.

AWH! This was so sad!!!!
It was gorgeous, hon, and I loved the last line.

You can feel the emotion so clearly. I litterally had butterflies in my stomach

Loved it, loved it, loved it.

That was amazing, Ella.
It was completely beautiful in an entirely simple way.
Your descriptions make my heart melt. :3

It kills me to say, but you’re light years away

I know exactly the feeling. I love how easily it is to relate to this.
So yeah, you're an amazing writer.

WHY HAS NO ONE COMMENT THIS!?
This is amazing! I really loved this
I think the best part was this one: The fire is then lit. I press back into you, and roll into your touch. Roaming hands wander all over my body, and my hips buck involuntarily. My breath is caught in my throat and as I moan quietly, I lose control of the situation. I turn over in haste to kiss your lips, the lips that I crave --oh, so much. Perfect.

The last sentence made me sad But it was done in a simple and beautiful way.
Keep it up!