Store Room Wrongs - Comments

I loved you're writing style in the beginning. It was very relaxed and natural; free and humor-like.
And after that you can tell that you put more emotion in trying to make your point and make the reader realize what's going on.

Over all it was fantastic. Nice job. :)

This was good.
I loved the flow of the narrative.
and it was a nice, short length so it didn't drag.
Good job.

Aww, I love this.
It was short but sweet
I wonder if she found them?
That would be so epic as a story if she did, like they are having an affair behind her back and... sorry Ima stop rambling,

I loved this,you desribed it well !XD