Prehistoric Love - Comments

Silly me, I didn't pay attention to the fact that it was a finished story. xD So, I just read it all and it's a pretty good story. I mean, love and dinosaurs- can't possibly go wrong there, eh? All in all I enjoyed reading this.
I caught a few more typos on the last chapter as follows:
“Nate, come one, we’ve got to go.” - "one" should be "on", I imagine.
When the wire did finally light we rushed back down to the truck, taking refugee behind it and the rock. - "refugee" should be "refuge". A refugee is a person on the run; refuge is the act of running and/or hiding or a hiding place.
Peeking out over the side I see a nose push out from the cave opening, then the rest of the Raptors body.- should be "raptor's body", possessive not plural.
Anywho, good work. :)

Well, I've just read the first chapter and this seems interesting. I will probably subscribe and finish reading, which is something coming from someone who prefers one-shots.
I caught one typo you need to fix: “Most defiantly.” I responded should be "definitely".

Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it.

It was really good. I was engrossed the whole time.

I did get the Raptor-crush thing. That was funny stuff.

The only criticism is to watch your tense. Sometimes you switched from past-tense to present-tense. But honestly, other than that it was awesome.

MUM-ZILLA
the scariest dinosaur of all.

I know it's waaay too early to give you a really detailed thought out, but so far...daamn. I'm really on the edge of my seat. Not much writing could actually make me feel this nervous. Good job so far.

NOOOOOO! u so can't leave off there! Anyway i love it.