Mad Hatter - Comments

I loved this. You captured the sheer disjointedness of the Hatter's mind so well and the last line was a perfect way to end it. Well done. (:

I apologize for not commenting earlier. DX I love how you captured the Hatter's character. Especially his... madness. ^,..,^ This makes me wish to join him at the Mad Tea Party so badly right now! Great job, my dear.

Can I fangirl now? Okay. /fangirls
Time was a stubborn thing.
^ He's RIGHT!
And butter really can fix everything x]
Love job! <3

I do believe it is a job well done! I like how you managed to maintain the Mad Hatterness though out it. I must also add that tt was very believable almost as if it was the Mad Hatter himself .

Just a few pointers:

#1: The word count needs to be in the summary. Don't worry about the link to my profile. And since the title is your character, that doesn't need to be in the summary. Just that word count.

#2: Whenever time feels that it's his turn for us to move, he squeals as loud asit he can muster, informing us poor chaps that it's time to move on.

Other than those two things, utter brilliance my dear Watson! I do love how you combined the movie and the original Alice to piece this story together. Anyways, good luck in the contest and thank you again for entering! :D