Vampire Freaks - Comments

I think you have a great story line, but you should try being a teeny bit more descriptive to what days and when they're going to do something.
I was completely lost at the ball bit.

yeah i do like it! erm...comment when you update plz

This was totally "scrumdiddlyumptiously"!!!!
sorry I couldnt read it sooner, I was on vacation. Definitely keep it up! Ah, if you only you could read minds! that would be sooo cool. and I love the whats it called telekinesis? I cant fucking spell it,. you know where she was talking in his head. Im surprised he didnt just get up and run out of the room! lol. that wouldve been funny. And I cant believe you ate a coyote!!!! ah!
But that was great cause its realistic you know? But still, coyote blood? ewwww. but I guess human blood isnt any better...

yay I like your stories! can't wait for more! please? soon?! I liked this one a lot already.

Seems very interesting
I'm a sucker for vampire stories. I'd love to see where this goes =]

Wow...i like it

very kool i like this a lot