My Dinosaur Life - Comments

Holy shit, I've reread this and it makes all the difference in the world when it's chronological.
That BITCH. I am so angry at myself for not noticing how bad they were for each other. Was I not paying attention, I don't know, but I just feel bad for the predicament Justin is left in. Poor bastard. An amazing story, however you read it. Thank you for writing this.

Completely amazing, this story is wonderful no matter how you read it.

A lovely ending/beginning. Going to reread everything in chronological order now.
Very awesome. The hyperlink isn't working, though.

What a wonderful beginning/end!
Ugh, I loved every bit of it. Now I'm going to read it in chronological order and tell you how I feel about that.

Ok. So, I just found this story and I've only read the first chapter. I wasn't sure what to expect, but you've done a great job with what I've read so far. I actually really liked how you worked in the lyrics and themes of the song and album. The dinosaur metaphor going through was quite great. I will likely read the rest of this and return with more comments. :)

I thought it was kind of strange how she inquired him out of the blue, but that's how they are :)
Also, you know that you titled the chapter "Sunny Day: Part Two". I was looking for "Sunny Day: Part One" and was confused.

I like that first meeting. It was like it was trying to be awkward, but she wouldn't let it be. XD

Adorable and sad at the same time, I loved it.
(I also can't wait to read it in order.)

I LOVED this story.
There aren't enough MCS stories on here, for real.
This was excellent!! c:

Holy snap. Oh my God, I feel terrible for Justin right now. Awww my God, he's like a beaten up puppy on the side of a highway. Awwwww. I love you right now. You are officially amazing and I didn't think it could've been any better than this. You're fantastic. :D

So Long, Farewell is my favourite song off of the new CD. I love it sooooo much.

And this was done wonderfully. :D

Ugh, I am seriously crying right now. This chapter was beautifully amazing, it might even be my favorite one.

Another fun chapter of amazing! I had a little dance when I found the email in my inbox. I like how she could never get rid of him, even if she wanted to. They get each other and that's nice. But it's pissing me off, the girl who knows every Motion City song there ever was, can't find all the references. I feel bad about myself.
Besides that, I'm quite excited about Sunny Day. What shall you do with it?The world will never know.

I'm always excited. This chapter was pretty adorable... in a weird sort of way.
And I cannot wait for the next three chapters.

Aw, that was sort of sweet. Finally finding understanding in another person. XD

Great chapter.

I'm not going to lie, I giggled a lot when I read about him checking his tires. Yay for pulling from real life! You just keep giving us bundles of amazing.
Couldn't catch all 8 references though, I did like the "Red Dress" one that you snuck in.

Aw, he never catches a break, does he? So sad.

I like though, that nothing gets better. I know it sounds almost sadistic, but it's more true to life, to his life especially. Things are always gain two steps, fall back three. I still have the feeling that he's beginning to change that though. I feel like now it might be reversed, so he's gaining a step each time. XD

And now I'm done with cliche metaphors.

I love these little thought bursts and how impulsive the both of them are. They're just perfect.
And in agreement with dorkosaur^^ I could never pull off that suspense. I still can't.
But it's crazy how dramatic things get, but these chapters always seem to go so quick for me.
I'll be Holmes if you be Sherlock.

She miscarried you say? *Pulls out a pipe* Something's afoot.
But seriously: Say what????? More information please? Your talent for suspense kills me.

And instant gratification is what you get, my dear ;)
I'm hoping for some Justin chapters. I'm getting a lot of Annie chapters and I'm wondering his point of view on this entire thing. And if he was really there to hold her wrist :D
You are doing a great job, but I will be sad when the story ends. I will miss the emails T_T