Steamy Nights - Comments

Layout Creativity and Readability ~ 10/15
-The layout is very bland and dark. But overall it is readable.

Grammar&&Spelling ~ 10/10
-None that I spotted.

Effort ~ 10/10
-I can tell a lot of effort went into this. Very good beginning and also ending.

Detail&&Storyline ~ 10/10
-I believed that I was watching a movie the entire time. I agree with the other commenteers, this would be very good with other chapters but it fine without them. :)

How Well You Follow The Rules ~ 10/10

I realized that I have read this before! haha Well Thank you for entering it into my contest and I will message you when I post the results.

I loved it! Of course it would be great if you added more chapters but I kind of liked the ending enough to be satisfied.

Doh. My. GAWD. I LOVED IT! ;D

That. Was. Amazing. Very good. More chapters would be nice but I also like it with just that one.. It's very good(:

im SPEECHLESS! this was awesome, amazing, fantastic ENOUGH SAID!

-thank you&come again.

First off, thanks so much for joining my contest :)
this was definately grand and sexy... :P
I love how you ended it too, but you really should add more chapters, because this is really, REALLY good.

I really liked this :) It all fitted together very neatly at the end and the characters were very well established even though it was only short :)

I really liked this :) It all fitted together very neatly at the end and the characters were very well established even though it was only short :)

This was awesomeeeeeee! The ending was good too. I think you should continue this, definitely. It would make a great full length story just as the one shot was good. :]

Thank youuuu for entering this in my contest. I will let you know when the judging period is over && the winners are announced. :]]]

I absolutely love this story! I would also love if you added more chapters!

Ooooh... the whole thing had me on the edge of my seat. I loved the ending though. It was perfect; and it would be great if more was adding on to it. Ths would make a really interesting story, instead of a oneshot. :)

Yes I agree. more chapters would be lovely : ]

you should add more chapters! tis quite good.

well i think if e's that good in bed she should try and teach her phone to swim before she looks at the message :p Good guys are few and far between so no killing them!!
anyway really good loved it :)