February 14th, 2011 at 07:08am
Steamy Nights - Comments
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I loved it! Of course it would be great if you added more chapters but I kind of liked the ending enough to be satisfied.January 31st, 2011 at 01:51pm
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Doh. My. GAWD. I LOVED IT! ;DNovember 1st, 2010 at 09:33pm
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That. Was. Amazing. Very good. More chapters would be nice but I also like it with just that one.. It's very good(:October 7th, 2010 at 08:31am
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im SPEECHLESS! this was awesome, amazing, fantastic ENOUGH SAID!
-thank you&come again.September 13th, 2010 at 12:44am -
First off, thanks so much for joining my contest :)
this was definately grand and sexy... :P
I love how you ended it too, but you really should add more chapters, because this is really, REALLY good.June 14th, 2010 at 01:54am -
I really liked this :) It all fitted together very neatly at the end and the characters were very well established even though it was only short :)May 29th, 2010 at 04:06pm
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I really liked this :) It all fitted together very neatly at the end and the characters were very well established even though it was only short :)May 29th, 2010 at 04:06pm
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This was awesomeeeeeee! The ending was good too. I think you should continue this, definitely. It would make a great full length story just as the one shot was good. :]
Thank youuuu for entering this in my contest. I will let you know when the judging period is over && the winners are announced. :]]]May 20th, 2010 at 06:54pm -
I absolutely love this story! I would also love if you added more chapters!April 26th, 2010 at 09:51pm
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Ooooh... the whole thing had me on the edge of my seat. I loved the ending though. It was perfect; and it would be great if more was adding on to it. Ths would make a really interesting story, instead of a oneshot. :)April 24th, 2010 at 05:59am
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Yes I agree. more chapters would be lovely : ]April 22nd, 2010 at 05:55am
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you should add more chapters! tis quite good.April 21st, 2010 at 11:51am
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well i think if e's that good in bed she should try and teach her phone to swim before she looks at the message :p Good guys are few and far between so no killing them!!
anyway really good loved it :)April 8th, 2010 at 07:24pm
-The layout is very bland and dark. But overall it is readable.
Grammar&&Spelling ~ 10/10
-None that I spotted.
Effort ~ 10/10
-I can tell a lot of effort went into this. Very good beginning and also ending.
Detail&&Storyline ~ 10/10
-I believed that I was watching a movie the entire time. I agree with the other commenteers, this would be very good with other chapters but it fine without them. :)
How Well You Follow The Rules ~ 10/10
I realized that I have read this before! haha Well Thank you for entering it into my contest and I will message you when I post the results.