I wonder is she gets pregnant after this chapter. I loved it though and that's an interesting way to spend her first night there. I loved the chapter though and I loved that you decided to extend it to 20.
ooh. hot. I really hope she doesn't get pregnant after this (even though that might be part of the story line) it just seems like in alot of stories lately they get pregnant. but whatever really good chapter to a good story thanks for updating!!
.... I hate cliffhanger endings. lol, so i hated Crosby up until i read this story :) You should feel great, that's not easy to do with me :) You're a great writer and should update soon XD
Oh, wow. Dang cliffhanger lol. I love this chapter, and this story in general! && i'm quite sad that this is ending in two chapters. I can't wait for the next update! :)