This is really cool. I love it. The title was the thing that made me click on this story. And then the summary made me read it. Usually if these 2 things don't appeal to me, then I wn't bother with the story. Mean, aren't I?
Anyway, I liked both of your things. The way these chapters jump around is really entertaining and cool. Keep up the brilliant work!
The title was the thing that made me click on this story.
And then the summary made me read it.
Usually if these 2 things don't appeal to me, then I wn't bother with the story.
Mean, aren't I?
Anyway, I liked both of your things.
The way these chapters jump around is really entertaining and cool.
Keep up the brilliant work!
Nat Xo