Tasteless - Comments

  • topless

    topless (100)

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    I liked the ending.
    Wonderful job.
    Very realistic.
    July 18th, 2010 at 10:32pm
  • breakfast after ten;

    breakfast after ten; (100)

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    My first thought was that I had to read it,
    because of the short description.

    I love stories like this and this was just wonderful.
    <3
    April 28th, 2010 at 02:49am
  • modern mariah.

    modern mariah. (100)

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    This line:
    "Kill you? I'm not killing you. I'm making you immortal."
    Is simply amazing, I'm jealous. I love it. It's amazing and means so much more then what the poor kids realized.

    I wish it were longer and more detailed, but I enjoyed it nonetheless.
    April 27th, 2010 at 10:55am
  • still a secret

    still a secret (100)

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    This story could use some edits, but I love this line:
    "Kill you? I'm not killing you. I'm making you immortal." :)
    April 26th, 2010 at 05:19pm
  • Perfect4Imperfection

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    This is...macabre.
    But...it's really interesting. I mean, I'm not into killing, but this really got me curious.
    Well, I have no idea which direction this will take and that's what makes it interesting.
    And even though this really is kinda horrible, I envy you for your glorious ideas.

    Gosh, thanks for putting me in your authors note - again.
    It makes me feel kinda special.
    thank you. :)
    April 26th, 2010 at 04:51pm