Take It From Here - Comments

its sooooooooo cute! love it! cant wait to see wat happens next or to read more!!!!!! update plz? :D

I love it(:Update soon please....is she Pregnant?!??!/!?! AHHH(:

I love it(:Update soon please....is she Pregnant?!??!/!?! AHHH(:

=D i made another page. yay.

...is she pregnant.

I'm so happy there is a sequal! This is amazing!

its amazing

I LOVE THIS STORY. You sexy time scenes are just perfect, so don't worry about them! <3 Justin is an awesome character!!!!

Great chapter(: Haha you did fine:PP The end was my favorite "Baby, YOUR incredible" (: Update soon please!

YAY! there will be a SEQUEL(: sooo excited(: Update soon! haha love this story

YAY! there will be a SEQUEL(: sooo excited(: Update soon! haha love this story

First off, I want to say that the fact that you're writing about Justin makes my heart do this weird dance, haaha.
While reading this, I was trying really hard to find something to pick at, something that would make me believe that this story is not as perfect as I reckon it is.
But it's pretty much perfect.
Your ideas and the way you write it is flawless, Olivia and Justin have such chemistry together that when I read this, it makes my heart do that weird dance again, and I love your writing in general. When I read this, I can imagine it all happening in my mind. Even your grammar/spelling is perfect :)
The only criticism I have is to spice up the story a little. I noticed that in chapter 28, you were hinting that everything's going well for Olivia and Justin. I think it's time for some heart-wrenching drama :D

Haggis sounds somewhat appalling :P
I wanna go to scotland one day, see all my Dad's relatives,
Good chapter :)
Update soon :D

I love it! haha I can't believe she made the boys try it:PPP Update sooon(:

very very good story... i loveee delmonicos i was like jumpin up and down when i saw that in here haha and it happens to be that my only mary kate&ashley movie is also holiday in the sun which i still think is pretty good :) love the plot and ur an awesome writer!

I love it(: Update soon(:

I AM LOVING THIS STORY! I have to keep reminding myself that you are an AMAZING writer!And this isn't even a real book!its a story on the internet!PLEASE UPDATE! I would subscribe. I actually am.But my Mibba won't show the stories I am subscribed to or email me! :( Well, Keep it up!!!

i love it

I love how she is protective of her sister x)
update soon (:

yay! and aww :( update sooon??