Painless Skies - Comments

That was great. Girls can be abusive too and I know that from experience. You did a good job at potraying his feelings. It would be nice if you added another chapter with her thoughts and feelings, seeing as your one-shot made me wanna see things from her side. Also, when you love someone truly and deeply you don't care about things like this at first and you try to cope with the situations believing things will get better but after years when the glass is broken and there's no way to fix it, you finally say "I'm done" even though it hurts you. Good job. <3

That was great. Girls can be abusive too and I know that from experience. You did a good job at potraying his feelings. It would be nice if you added another chapter with her thoughts and feelings, seeing as your one-shot made me wanna see things from her side. Also, when you love someone truly and deeply you don't care about things like this at first and you try to cope with the situations believing things will get better but after years when the glass is broken and there's no way to fix it, you finally say "I'm done" even though it hurts you. Good job. <3

This was actually pretty good. I got confused when I noticed that the girl was the abusive one, but it turned out pretty well.

Bitterly sad. It was nearly cliche, and yet at the same time, it wasn't. It really was different as were the other comments, and unique. I enjoyed reading it, though I feel like you missed out on some details and emotions, because the ending lost me a little.
But from what I did get, it was really good. You have good ideas and with a little bit of time, we'll all understand everything you write! You have so much talent already! Good job!

I agree with Hoofbeat, this was different. You don't really see the guys being abused in stories nowadays. But this was wonderfully written. Good job!

This was very good.
Again, thank you for entering it in my contest.

I like the fact that it is the guy being abused in the relationship instead of the girl. It is different, you have a very creative imagination, sweetie. If you keep it up and manage to finish something, I would suggest you trying to get something, if not many things, published!